Before The Worst
Comments by Allison C. on Wed, 11/07/12 19:24 I pardon the spelling error.
Comments by Jacky on Wed, 11/07/12 21:56 Interesting idea, Allison. Are the cut-off fingers intentional? The balance, with all the negative space at the bottom, is also an unusual choice. These are things you can easily experiment with if you're shooting digital. You might try positioning the hands at different points within the frame -- to see what you like. Perhaps you've done this and the result is your intent? For me, I think I might like to see the hands lower in the frame -- toward the bottom edge and perhaps more to the right to keep them deliberately off-center. Alternatively, a perfectly centered composition would be interesting to see too.
Comments by Jan Bjorklund on Thu, 11/08/12 05:12 Another interesting concept with the power of your words coming through strongly. I'm always looking for words that I find written usually as graffiti on walls because look after the words have faded from the wall their power lives on and that is the case with your words here that have been saved for all time in a photograph.
Comments by Ruth Rittichier on Thu, 11/08/12 05:56 I agree with Jacky's comments. Your idea is powerful, and just needs refining. Keep working on it with her suggestions, and keep posting. |
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