Comments by Jim E on Sat, 04/18/09 09:17
Wow, she's pretty hot.
I like the sepia-like treatment, although the bg could have been desaturated more, I think. I couldn't decide whether I like the dark area above her right eye or whether to punch some more light in there, but in the end I think I like it as is - it adds to the mood.
Comments by Bob Buckles on Tue, 04/21/09 22:39
I think I would have preferred pulling her a little farther from the wood pile and softened the background some more.
Comments by MONIQUE STAP on Sat, 04/25/09 15:48
I would have gone for a less busy background, now its competing with the model.
The body of the model is too tense, and therefore not very flatering. Make sure the model
keeps her body relaxed when posing. Last point is the fabric of the bikini, unfortunately
not very flatering. The straps on her hip is a point of attention also.
groetjes,
Monique