Posted by s on Sun, 03/03/19 16:57
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Comments by Jan Bjorklund on Sun, 03/03/19 18:42

The darkened nature of your b&w composition has a mysterious feel to it with the darkened figure passing by adding to that sense of mystery for me. I find I want to use the vertical line of the pole on the left as the left border for the picture to balance with the black vertical line on the right edge... stronger sense of the scene being framed in the mind of the viewer for me.

Comments by s on Mon, 03/04/19 12:19

I like that idea Jan. Something more like this?

Comments by Jan Bjorklund on Mon, 03/04/19 12:46

Yes, that's what I had in mind... this reduced perspective works to focus my attention... and my imagination...

Comments by s on Tue, 03/05/19 07:36

Thanks for the suggestion! I think it makes for a stronger image!